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Of all the times in my life ive cried
no one seemed to care even though I tried
through thick and thin, with mighty wind
to vocalize my anger and sift it through sin
ive realized a few things
brought them to attention
happiness is a thing, only replaced by anger
the perfect stranger, the one you thought you knew
overflowing with danger
cuz it wants to get to know you
your so through
revealing inner secrets and time told regrets
only life will listen, if you give her your ear
speak softly from the heart and release the fear
no sadness caught up in the madness you call life
I often think hard but don’t look twice
no time to get caught up in
what might have been
I hold on tightly to the love of friends
break the bond of love and you never win
last place in the life race and trapped without a friend
only one chance to begin again
never leave me alone for life is a sin
perfect circles of thought replaced by a square
counting dreams as they float lifeless through air
is no one there?
Will no one listen?
I abandon my planning to make it with intention
make it a dimension of this world I reside in
make it a mission to those who confide in me
all you want me to see is the pain that runs deep
river of hurt flowing through veins
it ceased to exist once she came
once she called out my name
once she took away the blame
and once, only once, she made my heart tame.
©2004-2009 ~rhymesayer
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:iconhanaofthedark:
beautiful. there are a few lines in here that i absoutely love. like...

-the perfect stranger, the one you thought you knew
-to vocalize my anger and sift it though sin

ok... now that i really look at it i really love the wording of this poem.
very nice. to be comended.... i need to write .. why haven't i been :?

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-never argue with idiots for they will bring you down to their level and beat you with experience
:iconrhymesayer:
thank you very much :hug: yeah, why haven't you been writing?!???!?! your writing was always good, I enjoyed reading it.. so get to it!! :shakefist:

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When life gives you lemons, you paint that shit gold.
:iconhanaofthedark:
lol well now i'm on christmas vacation so hopefully i'll find it in my some where. yeah i know... highschoolyaddayaddayadda. but thank you for all the support! always!

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-never argue with idiots for they will bring you down to their level and beat you with experience
:iconrhymesayer:
your welcome as always :)

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When life gives you lemons, you paint that shit gold.
:icon6-simplicity-9:
wow, as someone else had said, you set it off with this:

through thick and thin, with mighty wind
to vocalize my anger and sift it through sin

very nice work.

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Stock account: ~Simplicity-Stock

This shade of ordinary burns my eyes
simplicity, i despise
in simplicity i'm disguised.
:iconrhymesayer:
Thank you Sasha :glomp:

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When life gives you lemons, you paint that shit gold.
:iconsoulcalibur20003:
deep, as usual... good, as usual... merrychristmas, as once in a year...

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Life is a maze where all paths lead to the same exit
:iconrhymesayer:
lol, merry christmas yourself.

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When life gives you lemons, you paint that shit gold.

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